GENRE: Contemporary fiction / Humorous
PUBLISHED: St. Martin’s Paperbacks, 2002
WHY THIS NOVEL: can’t remember why I bought it; I read it during my “contemporary high” earlier this month
The back blurb:
“Lynn Wyman has a wildly successful practice in sensitivity training, teaching men how to communicate better with the women in their lives. Little does she now that her sensitive husband has been “communicating” with another woman – in the bedroom …
With a marriage on the rocks and a career in nose-dive, Lynn is in desperate need of a life make-over. She finds it in Brandon Brock, the macho CEO on the cover of ‘Fortune’ magazine’s ‘America’s Toughest Bosses’ issue. To restore her reputation, all she as to do is snag the notorious chauvinist as her new client, take a cue from ‘My Fair Lady’, and turn this pig into her own Pygmalion…
The perfect plan? No so fast. Somebody has been out to sabotage Lynn’s happiness, and before she can reclaim her career – and her heart – she’d better figure out who it is …”
Female Intelligence is one of the novels where the author’s voice works so well for me that I’m tempted to overlook the problems on the larger scale. I had fun reading Female Intelligence. I liked Heller’s humorous way with words and the chatty way Lynn narrates this story although Lynn is not necessarily a person you can like. She has (big) faults and seeing her realizing them and coming to grips with them plays an important role in this story. At one point in the story, Lynn’s assistant tells her that Lynn herself is a prime candidate for her sensitivity training because she doesn’t practice what she preaches; that Lynn resembles the men she has as clients in the way she speaks and behaves.
The back summary already delineates the three-part structure of the story. In the first part Lynn’s life goes down the drain because someone told the press about her marriage trouble. She’s left with no marriage, no career, no money, and comes up with the plan to make Brandon Brock undergo her sensitivity training called the Wyman Method. At the end of the first part, Brandon, “America’s Toughest Boss,” is Lynn’s client under one condition: he doesn’t want to make that public (which of course was the goal of Lynn’s plan to get her career back on track, but oh well). Part two is about the two of them battling it out over her sensitivity training. Of course, that’s also the part when they fall in love. But whoever is out to get Lynn isn’t done, so her life takes a nose-dive again. In part three, Lynn is in way deeper than before because she lost 1. Brandon (the love of her life) and 2. she can’t ignore any longer that someone is out to get her. The focus in this part shifts to ferreting out who’s behind this second sabotage (and was behind the first one as well).
My favourite part was easily the second part where Lynn and Brandon come head-to-head over her therapy (some nice banter there) and fall in love with each other. But then, that’s the most “romance-like” part of the story. The introduction of the mystery element in the third seemed sudden and jarring because of Lynn’s obliviousness before that someone was out to get her and the tone of the story shifted from romance to mystery. I was a bit confused what this novel wanted to be. A (satirical) take on all the men-women psycho babble books? A romance? A mystery? Neither was really successfully realized in the story. The best fit I could come up with, albeit not a smooth one, is to look at this novel as a story about a woman finding herself.
Aside from my impression that this novel didn’t know what kind of story it wanted to be, I thought the characters either underdeveloped or over-the-top. For example, Lynn’s husband and Brandon are so extreme they’re more caricatures than real characters. The ex-husband is whining wimp and I asked myself what Lynn saw in him and Brandon’s transformation from chauvinist pig into sensitive man is equally over-the-top (and as I said, I didn’t see Female Intelligence as a satire).
But my main problem with this novel is Lynn’s sensitivity training. It operates on her assumption that changing a man’s speech changes his character. To achieve that, Lynn developed her sensitivity training which relies heavily on men learning “Womenspeak.” While I’m certainly on board with the viewpoint that the way a person says something goes a long way to how the message is received, I have a huge question mark when it comes to the assertion that making a person parrot certain sentences will change this person’s character. Especially when the parroted sentences (suggested for use in a professional situation) are as silly as the following: “Susan, I don’t know how you metabolize desserts, but that chocolate mousse I had last night went straight to my thighs.” Huh? Aside from learning “Womenspeak,” the sensitivity training means listening to Michael Bolton or going out on a field trip asking for directions. To make it short: I thought this element of the novel rather insulting to female intelligence and a bit too cliché-ridden. I didn’t catch the fun-making/satirical spin, not really.
positive:
– banter between Lynn and Brandon
– chatty way of narrating with funny turns of phrases; helped me enjoy reading this novel despite all the irritating stuff
– liked the irony that a communication expert is a textbook candidate for that training
negative:
– the sensitivity training: the lines the men are to learn to master Womanspeak are utterly inane. If they are meant as tongue-in-cheek in relation to all the popular psycho babble books, it didn’t completely work. / Michael Bolton?
– mystery plot rather sudden and weak
– either rather hazy or overdrawn (secondary) characters
Overall:
– I think this novel works best when viewed as a woman-learns-about-herself kind of story
Would I recommend this novel? Maybe.
Would I read this novel again? Probably not.
Grade: 3 + / 5
Vacation Reads
7 JulAfter sorting out some internet connection trouble over the weekend – what fun after coming back from a vacation – I’ve finally time for posting some short comments about my vacation reads. Although I have to say, the books were truly vacation reads: my memories are hazy and the comments are rudimentary.
Kelley Armstrong – Stolen
urban fantasy; “Women of the Otherworld” series, #2
I had my problems with Elena for much of the first novel in this series, Bitten, though I appreciated Elena as a different heroine. I’m glad to say that my problems were much reduced in this novel. I enjoyed Stolen and I like Armstrong’s way to write. Stolen is a very straightforward story – Elena is captured, has to figure out how to escape and then comes back. Because I never doubted that she would escape, I didn’t find the story all that interesting. Still, Stolen gives a great introduction to all the other supernatural beings in this world. I think I’m going to continue with this series.
Verdict: 4/5
Madeline Hunter – The Rules of Seduction
historical romance; “Rothwell Brothers” series, #1
I really liked The Rules of Seduction. It’s a character-driven story and I especially enjoyed that Alexia and Hayden seemed to be mature characters. Alexia knows she has to be practical but nevertheless, she also resents giving up some of her romantic dreams. And Hayden, the way love creeps up on his analytical and logical self…
Verdict: 4,5/5
Dorothy Koomson – My Best Friend’s Girl
fiction (chick-lit)
It wasn’t a good decision to read this on my vacation. Reading at the pool and wanting to have a good cry? Not ideal, let me tell you. Especially the beginning had me teary-eyed quite a bit. Bonus: I didn’t know with whom Kamryn would end up with right up to the end although that question is not what this novel is about. Finished in one day.
Verdict: 4/5
Karen Marie Moning – Darkfever (audio book)
urban fantasy; “Fever” series, #1
from the author’s website:
Darkfever is the first audio book I’ve listened to. I really liked the experience and I think it changes the impression of a novel somewhat. I didn’t like the voice the narrator used for Jericho at all. I had images of reptiles dancing before my eyes whenever he talked. Not good.
LOL: I thought Mac’s name was Michaela! Good thing I didn’t see the way it is written before. I would have thought it too cutesy, enforcing my impression that Mac is an incarnation of Reese Witherspoon’s character Elle Woods in Legally Blond.
link to podcast of Darkfever
Susan Squires – Body Electric
science fiction romance
(It says paranormal romance on the book spine, I use SF romance because it's set in the (near) future and technology is involved, nothing supernatural)
This is the most interesting novel I read in terms of story. I thought it rather original. Sure, you have to believe and there were parts that I didn’t like all that much – the way Victoria’s creation got a body, for example – but overall, I enjoyed reading it. Also, Body Electric has a virgin hero. But with that kind of story it couldn’t be any other way.
Verdict:4/5
not finished:
Brandon Sanderson – The Hero of Ages
fantasy; “Mistborn” trilogy, #3
half of the blurb (to avoid spoilers of the first two books in this trilogy):
I only got halfway through this book on my vacation (I read ~ 400 pages) so no grade. But based on my experience with the first two books in this trilogy (really liked the first, thought the second one good), I fully expect some more story surprises on the way to the ending. So far, I enjoyed reading it.
Problems: It’s more than six months since I’ve finished the second book in this trilogy and that might be a bit too long to remember all revelations and how they fit in with what is happening now.
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